Comments4Kids Week 5

This week I was assigned to a post of two 9-10 year old students from England. Their post was a fictional story about a girl that was attending a science fair. In their story they wrote about a "blood red radioactive spider" that jumped out of nowhere and bit the girl. They continue to tell what happens to the girl after the spider bit her. They used a great variety of descriptive words in their writing. They also had about 15 comments on their story already. These comments were from many different people of all ages. I commented on their post and told them that they did a great job on the story. I told them that I especially enjoyed the ending as it left the reader in suspense about what will happen next. I enjoyed reading their story!